I have been searching blogs seeing what everyone else is doing. I used to write alot, though I never believed it to be any good. I never let anyone read it, why not open it up to complete strangers. Here it goes.
I have no one to talk to, no where to turn, no where to go.
No one, no where, I feel so low.
The person I have become, is not what I’d predicted.
Everything in my life is conflicted.
I never had any real friends.
When I think I’ve reached the bottom, My life descends.
I have no one to talk to, no where to turn, no where to go.
No one, no where, I feel so low.
I sit around, staring into the blue.
Who do I have to look to?
When my life is up, I think it is forever.
When it is down, Talking to someone becomes my endeavor.
I have no one to talk to, no where to turn, no where to go.
No one, no where, I feel so low.
I can’t eat or sleep, I just mourn.
My heart and feelings appear so worn.
What is a man supposed to do,
When everything in your life starts to fall through.
I have no one to talk to, no where to turn, no where to go.
No one, no where, I feel so low.
Wednesday, January 05, 2005
No one, No where
Crap from RC666 at 8:56:00 PM
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Ah, isn't it great to open up your writing to complete strangers? It was a good piece of writing at that. Plus the style does mimic the tone of the piece very nicely. And thanks for the compliments on my writing as well. That's quite the change in your photos- wow.
Soundtrack : cocktail (1988)
Here's a little song, I wrote
I might want to sing it note for note
Don't worry, be happy
Every life we has some trouble
When you worry you make it double
Don't worry, be happy ho…
(Don't worry, be happy yeah)
Uh uh uh uh don't worry be happy….(4x)
I arco place who lay your head
Somebody came and took your bed
Don't worry, be happy
The land lord say your rent is late
Hey may have to lit the gate
Don't worry, be happy (look at me I'm happy)
Uh uh…,don't worry, be happy
(I give you my phone no.
When you worried call me
I make you happy) oh…
Don't worry, be happy
Ain't got no cash, ain't got no style
In gumble gull to make you smile
But don't worry, be happy
Coz when you worry your face will frown
In that will bring everybody damn
So don't worry, be happy…(5x)
Now then, this song I wrote
I hope you learn it note for note
(Like good to children) don't worry, be happy
Listen to what I say in your life inspect some trouble
When you worry you make it double
Don't worry, be happy…(7 times…till fade)
Thank you both, I have been wondering if anyone even looks at this besides a few people I work with that I told about it.
I found your blog today, and your writing is good. However, it saddens me that you feel that way. There's always Someone there...
Actually I wrote that a couple months ago, but it is pretty true today still. I have plenty of aquaintances but not very many real friends. Heh, life's a bitch then you die, just trying to have some fun in the meantime.
Well, I came across your blog and I think your writing is great. I haven't had the guts to put up any of mine on my blog yet...maybe soon? Don't know, but I can see that we have a bit in common, as my writing seems to be a bit on the depressing side. Strangely enough though, I'm far from depressed, guess venting those feelings is an outlet and allows for me to be a happier person. I think it's ok when you get those feelings out, because once they're out you can move forward:)
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